Elizabeth Stone I like the concept of the presentation and the images were powerful, although the text was somewhat impossible to read from where I was seated and it may have been a bit too quick to fully appreciate each aspect for what its worth.
Lorin Weaver I like the closeness of presentation and how easily it was able to translate onto an audience without being blaring, I don't really have any advice being as I missed much of the presentation as I was typing a response to someone else's.
Benjamin Miller I liked that the presentation would have been able to stand along without the text, and although the text to help to strengthen it, my advise would be to remove some, possibly only leaving concise words or ideas between images, if anything
Brandon Lalli I was able to connect to the presentation as I actually did my part if getting others to sign petitions against such acts and concepts. I believe there are many propaganda-esque images regarding sopa and similar acts of which I think you could effectively incorporate into your presentation. The acts also threaten much more than just art on the internet, the free-flow of new ideas via anonymousity in and of itself are being threatened, I would advise you to touch on that as well.
Chandler Wilson I think that presentation did a good job of coordinating with the text and the classroom teachings, I missed much of it because I was typing, so I dont have much advise.
Danica Cantrell This presentation did a good job of connecting to the text as well, and does a great job of connecting to the author and audience personally. My only advise would be to possibly touch on how some of the models presented are somewhat outdated, and may not apply to society in modern times.
Seth Eckman I think the presentation told a compelling story of identity but im not sure all the text was directly related to the images shown, or, if the text had not been present, I would have viewed the presentation in the same light. Perhaps by using only powerful and graphic concise statements rather than sentences it would serve to strengthen the desired mindset for the audience.
Amber Howe I didnt quite understand how the conclusion answered the initial question, but this may be more of a matter of opinion than an problem with the presentation.
Deanna Brown I thought the unique topic make the presentation interesting and eye catching; it covers an aspect of life much of the class will go through and therefore touches the audience on a personal level. No advise but good job.
Kelsey Shapiro I especially liked the cutout and I feel like the message did successfully come across to the audience, I think some parts of the presentation could be "tidied up" just for a more fluent motion of the images.
Estelle Reidler I wasn't really familiar with some of the treatments so I wasn't sure what had happened by the end, without having heard so, I wouldn't have known she was a schizophrenic. I think the addition of a few pictures at the end showing a girls perhaps smiling in a padded room or something of the sort may make it more clear.
Charlotte Moyer I felt like the story relied more heavily upon the text than the images themselves, I think in a few places the text should be replaced with images specifically representative of the presentations' concept.
Elizabeth Stone
I like the concept of the presentation and the images were powerful, although the text was somewhat impossible to read from where I was seated and it may have been a bit too quick to fully appreciate each aspect for what its worth.
Lorin Weaver
I like the closeness of presentation and how easily it was able to translate onto an audience without being blaring, I don't really have any advice being as I missed much of the presentation as I was typing a response to someone else's.
Benjamin Miller
I liked that the presentation would have been able to stand along without the text, and although the text to help to strengthen it, my advise would be to remove some, possibly only leaving concise words or ideas between images, if anything
Brandon Lalli
I was able to connect to the presentation as I actually did my part if getting others to sign petitions against such acts and concepts. I believe there are many propaganda-esque images regarding sopa and similar acts of which I think you could effectively incorporate into your presentation. The acts also threaten much more than just art on the internet, the free-flow of new ideas via anonymousity in and of itself are being threatened, I would advise you to touch on that as well.
Chandler Wilson
I think that presentation did a good job of coordinating with the text and the classroom teachings, I missed much of it because I was typing, so I dont have much advise.
Danica Cantrell
This presentation did a good job of connecting to the text as well, and does a great job of connecting to the author and audience personally. My only advise would be to possibly touch on how some of the models presented are somewhat outdated, and may not apply to society in modern times.
Seth Eckman
I think the presentation told a compelling story of identity but im not sure all the text was directly related to the images shown, or, if the text had not been present, I would have viewed the presentation in the same light. Perhaps by using only powerful and graphic concise statements rather than sentences it would serve to strengthen the desired mindset for the audience.
Amber Howe
I didnt quite understand how the conclusion answered the initial question, but this may be more of a matter of opinion than an problem with the presentation.
Deanna Brown
I thought the unique topic make the presentation interesting and eye catching; it covers an aspect of life much of the class will go through and therefore touches the audience on a personal level. No advise but good job.
Kelsey Shapiro
I especially liked the cutout and I feel like the message did successfully come across to the audience, I think some parts of the presentation could be "tidied up" just for a more fluent motion of the images.
Estelle Reidler
I wasn't really familiar with some of the treatments so I wasn't sure what had happened by the end, without having heard so, I wouldn't have known she was a schizophrenic. I think the addition of a few pictures at the end showing a girls perhaps smiling in a padded room or something of the sort may make it more clear.
Charlotte Moyer
I felt like the story relied more heavily upon the text than the images themselves, I think in a few places the text should be replaced with images specifically representative of the presentations' concept.